Analysis of A Fatherly Discipline



Consider who coped with sinners,
Such hostility against Him;
And all of the discipliners,
That were making life very grim.

Grow not weary of fainthearted,
In your struggle against all sin;
Resist till they have departed,
When the shedding of blood will win.

Did you forget the incitement,
In being His sons and daughters;
Do you not feel the excitement,
Felt through the baptismal waters.

View not lightly the discipline,
Nor to be weary of the Lord;
He is merely rebuking sin,
Of the desires you adored.

The Lord disciplines He does love.
Chastise anyone who receives;
Discipline to endure thereof,
In Him as the Father believes.

Those without any discipline,
Considered illegitimate;
Can never be considered kin,
With the Lord never intimate.

Earthly fathers who disciplined,
We had been always respected;
With regret your actions rescind,
By what your father corrected.

Submit to the Father and live,
They chasten us for a short time;
And the willingness to forgive,
For sinfulness of our crime.

He disciplines for our good,
That we may share in holiness;
A painful reminder that it should,
Be more pleasant when we confess.

For righteousness yields peaceful fruit,
To anyone who had been trained;
While nourished deep in your root,
Letting you be righteously gained.

Copyright ©2023 Richard Newton Sherrer


Scheme ABAB CDED FAFA GHDH IJIJ GXDX XCXE XKXK LXLX MNMN X
Poetic Form
Metre 01011110 10100011 01101 10101101 11101110 01100111 01111010 10101111 11010010 01011010 11110010 11001010 11100100 11110101 11100101 10010101 01100111 0110101 1001011 01101001 10110100 0100100 11010101 10110100 10101100 1111010 10111001 11110010 01101001 11011011 00100101 111101 11001101 11110100 010010111 11101101 11001101 1101111 1101011 10111001 10101010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,320
Words 265
Sentences 12
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 41
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 96
Words per stanza (avg) 20

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Do Not Grow Weary Hebrews 12:3-11

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Written on March 02, 2023

Submitted by sir_ricky on March 01, 2023

Modified on March 12, 2023

1:19 min read
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Richard Newton Sherrer

I was born and raised on a farm in Pennsylvania. It was a small family farm that was handed down through 8 generations of Sherrer men until my father; Newton just could not make a living from it any longer. He thought that I would make a better living away from the farm. So, I decided to join the Air Force in 1969 upon graduating from high school. I gained quite a bit of experience and insight on life while in the service. Even though I was only stationed on the east coast of the US, my Air Force career took me to Germany and Korea. After 20 years wearing of the blue uniform, I decided going in a different direction and found myself becoming very diverse in many different fields. Something still seemed missing to me after being separated from the service for about 10 years. The Air Force was a way of life for me, but really missed life in Korea. I found myself changing careers again. Poetry was an interest of his since my days in high school. With returning to the Lord, I felt motivated to write of my Christian beliefs. I started looking at Bible verses and reflecting on my own personal experiences. The Bible was found to be as true today as to when the various books were written. I could see much of what the Bible is teaching us as valid as every in modern time. It felt only natural to me on using his personal experience based on Bible verses and see much of my own life written in the Scriptures. God inspires me what to write about though. I do not claim to be an expert on God or the Bible. I am just a Christian who has become enlightened to write poetic verses from the Holy Scriptures. more…

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