Analysis of On the Petals of My Heart
Eucharia Nwoke 1994 (Abeokuta)
The butterfly flutters from flower to flower,
In quest of the purest of nectar.
The petals blaze in their glory
Heralds of a union, the source of new life.
The fruit needs its flower,
the butterfly the petals.
One to voyage, the other to guide.
One then to its wings.
The other onto its stock.
Two destinies yet one purpose.
Thus
Like the rustling of a soft wind on the leaves
and the lightness of a butterfly,
you perched on the delicate petals of my heart.
Tickling joy and revelations of could bes were instant.
But sooner than known,
for fear of being ensconced in the softness
of my folds -
to sip from the sweetness of my nectar-
you fluttered off as from a poisoned pool.
The memories –
fit to be preserved in every breathe,
now till eternity-
never to be relinquished.
Scheme | AABX AXX XXCCXXXX XCXAX XXBX |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 01010110110 011010110 01010110 10101001111 011110 010010 111001011 11111 0101011 11001110 1 10101011101 00101010 111010010111 110010111010 11011 11110010010 111 1110101110 1101110101 0100 1110101001 110100 1011010 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 782 |
Words | 163 |
Sentences | 11 |
Stanzas | 5 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 3, 8, 5, 4 |
Lines Amount | 24 |
Letters per line (avg) | 25 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 122 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 29 |
About this poem
Was written in 2020 in the heat of a personal struggle on a loving relationship cut short.
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Written on June 26, 2020
Submitted by eulumma21 on February 26, 2023
Modified on March 10, 2023
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