Analysis of We Have Forgotten God in This Busy World



In the hustle and bustle of life's swirl,
We've forgotten God in this busy world.
Our days are filled with work and play,
And we've pushed our faith so far away.

We wake up early and rush out the door,
Our minds preoccupied with tasks galore.
We don't take a moment to stop and pray,
Or to thank the Lord for a brand-new day.

Our phones and screens have taken control,
And we've lost touch with our spiritual soul.
We scroll and swipe, our minds in a daze,
And forget about God's amazing grace.

We need to slow down and take a breath,
And remember what's truly important, lest
We lose sight of our purpose and aim,
And forget the One who can take away our pain.

So let's make an effort to pause and reflect,
And give thanks to God, who we often neglect.
For in Him, we find true joy and peace,
And our busy lives find a sense of release.


Scheme XXAA BBAA CCXX XXXX DDEE
Poetic Form Quatrain  (40%)
Etheree  (20%)
Metre 0010010111 1010101101 101111101 0111011101 1111001101 1010101101 1110101101 1110110111 1010111001 011111010001 1101101001 0010110101 111110101 00101100101 1111101001 0010111101101 11111011001 01111111001 101111101 010101101101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 841
Words 185
Sentences 9
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 129
Words per stanza (avg) 33

About this poem

The poem is about how in today's fast-paced and technology-driven world, people often forget about the importance of spirituality and God in their lives. It highlights how people are so busy with work and technology that they don't take time to stop and think about their spiritual well-being. The poem encourages people to slow down, reflect, and make an effort to connect with their spiritual selves and give thanks to God for all the blessings in their lives. Overall, the poem serves as a reminder of the importance of balancing the demands of the modern world with our spiritual needs.  

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Written on February 25, 2023

Submitted by SAHPoems on February 24, 2023

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Syed Afzal Hussain

The writer is a qualified English Language Teacher and has been teaching English As A Foreign Language for many years. He has achieved his Certificate in TESOL from TEFL International. He has also got Diploma in English Language as a Foreign Language from England and a Diploma in English as a Second Language from USA and a Certificate in Advanced English from St Giles College, Central London, England. Besides this he has earned his Certificate in Teaching Overseas Teachers from GEOS Academy, Brighton & Hove, England; and Certificate in International Teaching English from Hilderstone College, Kent, England. Syed Afzal Hussain is a Certified Licensed NLP Practitioner, NLP Master Practitioner & NLP Trainer, trained by Dr. Richard Bandler, Paul McKenna, David Shephard and Michael Breen. He has got NLP education from McKenna Breen Ltd., London, England. He also has a Diploma in Life Coaching and an Advanced Diploma in Life Coaching from England. He is also a CBT Certified Practitioner. more…

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