Analysis of Dum Doobeedoo Dum Dum

Lawrence S. Pertillar 1947 (Connecticut)



Sensational can be a fiction kept to fiction it,
Sicken to remove all presence of reality.
With a feeding of mentalities,
To accept and believe...
Deluding truth receives a normal way to live!

And...
The image of this fades the difference made,
Between...
Consciousness to keep it crazed to approve.
Severed and detached,
A never to get back common sense.
Gone.
No longer to recognize its meaning.
Value and purpose.

Dum doobeedoo dum dum.
No discipline.
Or respect to know it done.
Living to be sickened by a fiction that comes,
To delude and keep restricted...
From a truth to perceive threatens everyone.

And...
Down,
Swirling in a cesspool taught to teach...
Reflects a greatness needing less,
Competent diversified ethnicity.
To be ruled and controlled over by the ones,
Seeking to stay...
Dum doobeedoo dum dum.
As long as it's the image of it they condone!
To own,
And to claim their obtained achievement!

And speeding in a cesspool taught to teach,
Is their own to defend and protect!


Scheme xabxx Cxxxxbxxb Deebxe CxfbabxDggx fx
Poetic Form
Metre 01001101011101 10101110110 101011 101001 010101010111 0 01011101001 01 1001111101 10001 010111101 1 110110110 10010 1111 1100 1011111 101110101011 10101010 1011011010 0 1 10001111 01010101 1000100100 11100110101 1011 1111 111101011101 11 011101010 010001111 111101001
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 996
Words 205
Sentences 23
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 5, 9, 6, 11, 2
Lines Amount 33
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 155
Words per stanza (avg) 34
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Written on February 20, 2023

Submitted by lpahtillah on February 20, 2023

Modified on March 05, 2023

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