Analysis of The boxer

Jeff Patry 1976 (Nebraska)



Ass over tea kettle
He falls and he falls.
Ass over backward
He flops and he sprawls.

But he rises again to continue the fight
Jab, jab, uppercut – left, left, right.

A dervish of whirling,
He swings and he swings.
A twirl of a skirmish,
He darts and he zings.

But try as he may to do what he might,
Pow! To his jaw. Out go the lights.

A sack of potatoes.
He drops to the ground.
A sack full of sorrow,
He’s lost, he stays down.


Scheme XAXA BB XXXA BX XXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 110110 11011 11010 11011 111001101001 111111 010110 11011 011010 11011 1111111111 11111101 011010 11101 011110 11111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 436
Words 104
Sentences 11
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 2, 4, 2, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 64
Words per stanza (avg) 18

About this poem

This is a comment on the futility of trying.

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Written on January 17, 2023

Submitted by jpat6000 on January 17, 2023

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Jeff Patry

Born '76. Scholar then engineer then science teacher and now maybe museum guy. Death: not yet more…

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