Analysis of Help
Imprisoned in my own mind
My thoughts, like bars on a cell
I try to move- I’m stuck
My thoughts are slowly drowning me
The more I fight, the more I’m swallowed-
My mind is darkness
The blackest black
In the darkest dark
I am afraid, but I am not alone
My demons hold me still
Their words cut into me like knives
They call out my flaws, my insecurities, my weaknesses
I try to fight but they fight back harder
They are insurmountable
I try, I try so hard but it is overwhelming
I feel weak
I can’t see
I can’t breathe
I can’t move
Help
But nobody’s coming
because it’s all in my mind
And if I say anything, they will think I’m crazy
They will say nobody is there, they will say it’s all in my head
But I see them- I know them. Sometimes I feel comfort in their darkest
I have known them my whole life
To a point where I don’t know how I’d live without them
So I just here, exhausted, defeated, terrified
As the demons choke me harder
And I smile and say “I’m fine”
(help)
Scheme | abcdefghijklmnopdqrSoadtuvwxmyS |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 0100111 1111101 111111 11110101 011101110 11110 0101 00101 1101111101 110111 11101111 11111101001100 1111111110 110100 111111111010 111 111 111 111 1 1110 0111011 011110111110 11111111111011 11111110111100110 1111111 1011111111011 111101001010 10101110 0110111 1 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 1,008 |
Words | 204 |
Sentences | 2 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 31 |
Lines Amount | 31 |
Letters per line (avg) | 24 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 746 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 194 |
About this poem
A poem on my experience with anxiety and depression
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Written on January 22, 2023
Submitted by gina_kristoff on January 22, 2023
Modified on March 14, 2023
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