Analysis of Blue

Neha Hashim.M 2002 (Kerala)



When I first saw you
I saw a blue shine in your eyes
When I got to know you
The blue became deep
When I first kissed you
The blue became damn deeper
And now here I am
Looking at this blue getting lighter and lighter
Lighter as a light sky
Lighter as a calm sea


Scheme ABACADEDFG
Poetic Form Etheree  (30%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 11111 11011011 111111 01011 11111 0101110 01111 101111010010 101011 101011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 262
Words 57
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 205
Words per stanza (avg) 56

About this poem

When the eulogy became my heart break anthem, I found the poetic shine in your absence

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Submitted by nehahashim05 on January 16, 2023

Modified on March 30, 2023

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