Analysis of Beginnings



If I could go back in time to the beginning,
Before fate toyed and played upon my feelings.
Before my heart was ever torn and broken.
Before I built the walls where I remain hidden.

Things could have been so different now,
But fate is cruel and would never allow.
The scars and pain have taken their toll,
And broken me so I am no longer whole.

If I could ask one wish from whoever’s in charge,
That I live the rest of my life where lies are barred.
Where my quest will have led me to my soul mate in life,
And happiness will guide us through the star filled nights.


Scheme XXAA BBCC XXXX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (33%)
Metre 111110110010 01110101110 01111101010 011101110110 111111001 11110011001 010111011 01011111101 1111111101 111011111111 1111111111101 010011110111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 576
Words 125
Sentences 8
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 37
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 147
Words per stanza (avg) 37

About this poem

It’s a poem about looking back on loves losses and the pain while looking forward to the future and finding new love going forward

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Written on January 28, 2023

Submitted by walt.benson5 on January 28, 2023

Modified on April 04, 2023

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