Analysis of "A prisoner's Appeal"

Jossa Macascas 1987 (General Santos City)



"A Prisoner's Appeal"

Pieces of unanswerable questions playing in my mind was settled,
In this premises felt miserable when single starred given.
What could be possible tendencies might I've encounter?
With this called cursed placed for the other.
Is there any hope for me, could offer?
With this destined path I cross over.

Is it moments screen and tested?
Rather could be a mortgage of sin unconsciously taken,
Is it a way to open my eyes which very long time closed?
A questions that my systems regularly asking,
Hoping to catch a reason that could be served as medicine,
To ease the pain that my internal shouting.

Accused in a crime I've never committed,
Is making me fells tortured and deteriorated.
A moment of time which only proves the opinions of many,
A prisoner true to life sad story, not all had jailed were really guilty.

Such people's character was then I socialized,
Lots kind of crime I got understand,
A long, long story which is in everyone's hands.
Bringing in to my conclusion and said,
Ignorance of the law has no excused,
Which is innocent, never used.

A realization of being stuck up in a corner,
No hope for me could offer,
A 1,2,3,and many same kinds of life story,
It is somehow an inspiring tale to me.

Through the years have done,
Difficulties could never be gone,
Taking it as a challenge, one,
Instead of holding self-pity with sense has none,

I used my time to learn some kind of lesson able to teach this damn.
Accused criminals were majority small-time,
If not because of puberty,
It is a planted crime scene set up well who's in authority.
Many of prisoners judged as guilty,
It's between God and him can tell innocence and reality.


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Poetic Form
Metre 010001 1010001010011110 0110011000110110 11110010011010 111111010 1110111110 111011110 11101010 10110101110010 110111011110111 0101110100010 101101011111100 11011101010 01001110010 1101110001000 0101111010010110 0100111110111101010 11010011110 11111101 01110110101 1001101001 1001011101 11100101 01010110110010 1111110 0010111110 1111010111 10111 100011011 10110101 011101101111 11111111110101111 011000010011 11011100 1101011111100100 1011001110 10110111100010
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,676
Words 342
Sentences 16
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 1, 6, 6, 4, 6, 4, 4, 6
Lines Amount 37
Letters per line (avg) 36
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 165
Words per stanza (avg) 37

About this poem

Ignorance might leads us to misfortune, being aware and careful about matter sorrounds on our daily life is very important, especially government laws and execution. Once it is implemented everyone has no excuse even innocence.

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Written on February 08, 1987

Submitted by macascasjossa on January 23, 2023

Modified on March 14, 2023

1:44 min read
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Jossa Macascas

A Filipina who loves to read and write and always picking ideas out of it. more…

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