Analysis of Dear Ma



Dear Ma, I write to you in fear,
Of what this night might bring me here.
Shot in the chest, I lie and hide,
In a bunker, in the middle of a battlefield side.

The world is at war, as you may know,
And I fear I might not see the dawn’s warm glow.
But I think of you and the love you give,
And it helps me to stay strong, so that I may live.

I remember the days when I was just a boy,
With you by my side, I felt nothing but joy.
Your laughter and love always filled my days,
And I hope that this letter finds you in a better place.

I pray that I may see you once again,
To tell you the stories of my travels and when
I fought for freedom, for the land I call home,
And to thank you for the love that I have known.

But if this night is my final call,
And my time here is done, I want you to recall
That I love you, Ma, and will forever hold
The memories of you, in my heart, as I’m told.

For I know that I will join the countless souls,
Who have gone before me, and will not grow old.
And though I may not be with you by your side,
My love for you, Ma, will never subside.

So I bid you farewell, with a heavy heart,
And I pray that we’ll meet again, from a world apart.
For though I may not make it through this night,
I will always love you, with all my might.

Yours, always and forever,
Your son.


Scheme XXAA BBXX CCXX DDXX EEFF XFAA GGHH XX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 11111101 11111111 10011101 0010001010101 011111111 01111110111 1111100111 011111111111 101001111101 11111111011 110011111 01111101100101 1111111101 111010111001 11110101111 01111011111 111111101 01111111111 11111010101 010011011111 11111110101 11101101111 01111111111 1111111001 1111110101 0111110110101 1111111111 111111111 110010 11
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,308
Words 311
Sentences 13
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 2
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 121
Words per stanza (avg) 35

About this poem

The poem is a letter from a soldier on a battlefield, writing to his mother, during World War 2.

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Written on February 08, 2023

Submitted by brejesh.shan on February 08, 2023

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Brejesh Umashankar

Brejesh Umashankar is a contemporary Indian poet, known for his powerful and evocative poetry that delves into the complexities of the human experience. His work is characterized by its rich imagery, evocative language, and deep exploration of themes such as love, heartbreak, pain, suffering, strength, comedy and identity. He uses his poetry as a medium to express his innermost thoughts and emotions, drawing inspiration from his personal experiences and observations of the world around him. His poetry is known for its powerful imagery, and its ability to evoke strong emotions in the reader. more…

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