Analysis of Failures



Failures are normal
But failing is wilt of valour.

At age five you fail with longings
At ten you fail to get mumma's time
At fifteen fail to get a fair admire
At twentyfive fail to get a job of choice
It goes on and on.

But there is a secret pleasure in it.
At five you get Mumma's love
Fifteen , a teen age love.
Twentyfive a real love afront.
But failures are failures.

Dreaming girls fail the realities
Career ones lose the family ties.
Failure in love life lifts the sober mood
Longing for women enslaves pitiful.

Failures are normal realities
Features apart, a stepping stone
Achive and acquire the world lost.
Some failures are crazy creations.

Sobbing mind can't accept.
Sorcerer's word is not a binding force.
Pin,bin and win the lost encounter.
'Cos you are still in the reckoning.

Solace the mind to recoup.
Soldiers always see the tunnel end
Socialise to see a crowd ahead
Sensitise the moves to win around.

Failures are not a drag on.
Failures are here to stay.
All inventions owe its base to failures
Of broken heart and mind
Of enduring cannons of valour.
Be sportive to accept failures.
Without failures no winning.

Winner takes it all
But it is the losers' world to chill.
Profanity binds the culpable
Pitch the lost in black and white.

Failures transcend the geopolity
Fair enough to eschew modernity
Floor the same with caution
Forget that the time and tide won't wait.
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Scheme AB XXBXC DEEDF GXXA GXXX XXBH XXXX CXFXBFH XXAX DXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 10110 1101111 11111110 11111111 1011110101 111110111 11101 1110101001 111111 010111 10111 110110 1011010 011101001 1001110101 101101100 1011010 10010101 10010011 110110010 101101 11110101 10101010 111100100 1001101 10110101 1110101 1011101 1011011 101111 1010111110 110101 10101011 1110110 0110110 10111 111010111 010010100 1010101 100101 1011010100 101110 011010111 1
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,431
Words 286
Sentences 25
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 2, 5, 5, 4, 4, 4, 4, 7, 4, 5
Lines Amount 44
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 111
Words per stanza (avg) 25

About this poem

Failures are normal in a civilization. Everyone fails in one or more occasions. But attempt again and regain strength to move forward. That is it.

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Written on February 07, 2023

Submitted by vasane53 on February 07, 2023

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:27 min read
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Srinivasan R

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