Analysis of is this the master plan??



“What is the master plan??”
What is the master plan? Is Jesus more important than you and me? If he is God’s only begotten son than who and what are we? Are we not important?  So, who made him the chosen one? And who made the chosen one the chosen one? And so on and so forth you get the point! My questions are simple, when who or what made God? And who made them? what the hell were they thinking? Who or what made us I wonder did they know they were going to fail so miserably? Surely this wasn’t the masterplan. If so what in the heck??
How could you hurt us like this?  Where is the divine intervention? How come you never intervene? How can you make a human race and a planet just to let it all go to waste?? We didn’t ask to come to this earth. We just got placed, on a planet that we’re not even supposed to be on in the first place. Hell, even Mother nature is so fed up with all the waste… The overgrown population its exhausting. Even she is screaming for you to intervene… So, she can’t help but to throw fits causing tsunami’s earthquakes, record breaking floods, she knows now is death and destruction that she will for sure always bring. What was so vast and promising is now confused and angry. Mother nature  is taking her anger and frustration out on everything that gets in her way, making Africa just another streaming path of floods death and destruction she is so numb she doesn’t even know how to absorb her own tears instead they become streams of her  tears that leave nothing but shredded debris  and destruction in her path she is so angry you can almost hear her scream……………….Meanwhile the desperate mother is crying thinking how am I going to get enough cash to feed my starving children and get them off to a clear path? The young women are no longer safe they are getting raped and thrown into the street while assailant leaves without a trace..  
..Meanwhile the children are thinking is today the day I get shot up in class? they are no longer safe the entire world has lost their way, now all that we know now is  pain….. The children have been thrown the unspeakable… Neglect from technology threw only our own fault we just hand them a tablet and that takes care of that…. It’s like a drug it brainwashes and has corrupted the innocent minds of our future. What was so bright and innocent, has turned them into little killing machines killing their own parents due to broken hearts and confused minds. So numb due to lack of emotions because they don’t know how to show them. When a 6-year-old comes to school only to shoot their teacher. The insidious ways of technology has robbed our children blind and stole any kind of promising   future there is no way to stop it we are doomed…   Is this the master plan? What is the lesson?


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Characters 2,814
Words 520
Sentences 36
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 4
Lines Amount 4
Letters per line (avg) 541
Words per line (avg) 132
Letters per stanza (avg) 2,163
Words per stanza (avg) 526

About this poem

I wrote this because this is how i have been feeling lately. I do believe in a higher power it is just I have been questioning.

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Written on February 06, 2023

Submitted by andream.20498 on February 06, 2023

Modified on April 30, 2023

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