Analysis of Ada, in my building
Douglas Blair 1951 (London)
Every Wednesday morning
She is bundled up
Leaning on her walker
Waiting for the transport bus
To the Seniors’ Centre.
I will stop to chat
With this queen of neighbours.
Widowed. Eighty perhaps.
Braving the elements
To shop for a few items.
Afternoons, two blocks away.
Exercise, Community, Stimulus.
Her contralto voice
Yodels a bit
From modulated winds.
Her memories are kept, hoarded.
She smiles at me.
Maybe in the Laundry Room.
But if I venture
Into a story of more than
Five sentences.
She drifts away.
Looks to one side.
Sighs.
Dismisses the encounter.
Avoiding embarrassments.
Has no comeback.
Nice Lady.
Nice Neighbour.
Nearly about to leave Port.
As have others.
(Murray most recently.)
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1001010 11101 101010 1010011 101010 11111 11111 101001 100100 1110110 011101 100100100 011 101 110001 01001110 1111 1000101 11110 01010111 1100 1101 1111 1 0100010 0100100 111 110 11 1001111 1110 101100 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 698 |
Words | 138 |
Sentences | 24 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 32 |
Lines Amount | 32 |
Letters per line (avg) | 17 |
Words per line (avg) | 4 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 551 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 115 |
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Written on February 05, 2023
Submitted by dougb.72572 on February 05, 2023
Modified by dougb.72572 on February 05, 2023
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