Analysis of The Cost of Failure



I try my best to do a thing,
   and when I fail to reach my target by a little bit,
        I am flogged like a mangey dog in the street,
            by my love, so sweet?

Sometimes in life, we all fall a little short,
    that does not mean the mission I abort,
        to my goal, I slog along,
            even though the treatment I receive is wrong.


Scheme XXAA BBCC
Poetic Form Quatrain  (50%)
Metre 11111101 01111111010101 1111011001 11111 01011110101 1111010101 1111101 10101010111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 355
Words 74
Sentences 2
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 4, 4
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 116
Words per stanza (avg) 33

About this poem

Personal experience with my lady friend.

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Written on February 04, 2023

Submitted by on February 04, 2023

Modified on March 05, 2023

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