Analysis of A soldier has two mothers

Basudev Karmakar 1974 (West Bengal , India)



 A soldier has two mothers

His flood-haunted tiny village,
Gaily and blissful, no trace,
Ribs and its bones all for badge,
Was traced Jutting out; no race.

The few mites escaped the night
Excluded his kind siblings and begetters;
He left his garrison with much fright,
Traced none of his own poor settlers.

He settled himself to far seashore,
The woe-betides and loneliest was he,
The sea-roar chagrined up his beaten core.
All the nights he would sweat and die by the sea.

The memory of the children all gaily-clad,
In a ceremony or a festival,
How they all went mad,
Was the only source of his little enthrall.

The year ran and in the dead of a night,
He built his village of the sea sand;
He put all the mellow inmates inside,
Imagined the community perished in band.

He saw the sea engulfing it with a savage roar,
They could barely screamed or had a groan,
All torn and beaten in wound and sore,
His parents’ hands groped for their nation’s son.
                                        Basudev Karmakar


Scheme A XBXB CACA DEDE FGFG CHXH DXDXD
Poetic Form
Metre 0101110 11101010 1001011 1011111 1110111 0110101 010111001 111100111 11111110 11001111 0110111 0110111101 10111101101 010010101101 0010010100 11111 1010111101 0110001101 111101011 111010101 010001001001 1101010110101 111011101 110100101 1101111101 11
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,019
Words 206
Sentences 8
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 5
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 109
Words per stanza (avg) 25

About this poem

A soldier's village is engulfed by the river. He hears the news and comes back. He finds none of his kith and kin including his family. He settles to a sea side. One night he makes sand -village. The sea engulfs the village. He hears the clear call of his parents.

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Written on February 04, 2023

Submitted by karmakar.basudev on February 04, 2023

Modified by karmakar.basudev on February 04, 2023

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Basudev Karmakar

Lives in Kolkata. Graduated from Malda, west Bengal...persuaded MA from Kolkata, West Bengal. more…

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