Analysis of Carnal Fervour



In a carnal fervour, my desire doth swell,
An inferno of passion, a tempestuous hell.
My heart a cauldron, ablaze with yearning,
My mind a labyrinth, ever churning.

A symphony of sensation, a crescendo of lust,
My senses awhirl, my body thrust.
In a rapturous fervour, my senses alight,
With a longing unquenched, a hunger for delight.

My loins ache with a pulsing need,
A carnal craving, my body doth plead.
A profligate yearning, an insatiable hunger,
A fervent desire, an insistent urging.

A tumult of emotion, a deluge of ecstasy,
A tempest of sensation, a maelstrom of bliss.
A whirlwind of passion, a conflagration of lust,
My heart aflame, forever to combust.

So let us succumb, to this frenzied desire,
And bask in the warmth of this passionate fire.
For in the realm of love, there is no higher law,
Than to yield to the tempest, and let passion be the awe.


Scheme AABB CCDD EEFB XXCC FFXX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (40%)
Metre 00101101011 101011001001 1101001110 110101010 01001010001011 11011101 00100111001 10101010101 11110101 0101011011 010101010010 010010101010 01010100101100 010101001011 01110001011 1101010101 111011110010 010011110010 100111111101 11110100110101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 870
Words 176
Sentences 10
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 135
Words per stanza (avg) 31

About this poem

This poem is about my extremely intense desire and passion for a girl.

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Submitted by brejesh.shan on January 28, 2023

Modified on March 24, 2023

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Brejesh Umashankar

Brejesh Umashankar is a contemporary Indian poet, known for his powerful and evocative poetry that delves into the complexities of the human experience. His work is characterized by its rich imagery, evocative language, and deep exploration of themes such as love, heartbreak, pain, suffering, strength, comedy and identity. He uses his poetry as a medium to express his innermost thoughts and emotions, drawing inspiration from his personal experiences and observations of the world around him. His poetry is known for its powerful imagery, and its ability to evoke strong emotions in the reader. more…

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