Analysis of The turning heart



Forget about me leave me to be, I deserve what I get it’s plain to see

If ever I thought I deserved anything more, I only need to look at those I adore

Giving my heart to love in the end, only to you lose again and again

The pain underneath try to hide what I can

My greatest fear that lonely old man

Grow cold my heart I wish you would. I don’t deserve any good

Give me more pain I can handle it all

Cold dead heart push away push away, Stay in the dark and hide from the day


Scheme X X X A A X X X
Poetic Form
Metre 0101111111011111111 1101110110111011111101 1011110011011101001 0101111111 110111011 111111111101101 1111111011 111101101100101101
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 493
Words 115
Sentences 2
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 46
Words per line (avg) 13
Letters per stanza (avg) 46
Words per stanza (avg) 13

About this poem

Wanting love. Feeling the loss of love. Taking on undue pain. Consumed by hopelessness.

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Written on January 27, 2023

Submitted by mike1970evans on January 27, 2023

Modified on April 21, 2023

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