Analysis of Reflecting on Reflections
Standing before the bathroom mirror,
things couldn't have been clearer.
When I look at myself, I feel strange.
It's most definitely time for a change.
I step back in overwhelming shame.
I am not happy with my name.
Nor proud of some of the things I put on it,
the forcing of a haiku, free verse, or sonnet.
Is feeling this way considered obscene?
If only this mirror could turn into a screen,
then I could change what I see, shrink and erase.
Edit certain details in my flaky face.
Then I'd go and edit all of that code.
Improve the way all of it flowed,
remove each one of my past mistakes.
Like failing that class, or talking to the fakes.
I could finally improve my ability to write
and make it so I could sleep throughout the night.
So many more things I would want to revise,
even stopping the thoughts of seeing my demise.
As with most, I'm battered and bruised.
When people hear about it, they're suddenly amused.
Instead of giving a damn and being a good friend,
they 'relate' and move on, as if it's just a trend.
This may come as a shock, but these feelings are real.
People feeling this aren't just whining, it is a big deal.
The fact we're always accused of being dramatic
is something I personally find quite problematic.
That's one of the last things I'd remove,
my social skills could definitely improve.
I can't talk to people without a panic attack.
Yet I'm merely human, so perfection I'll always lack.
That doesn't mean things aren't worth a tinker,
don't fall for the trap, hook line and sinker.
You're worth a fix, it's okay to break.
Abandoning yourself is a grave mistake.
Scheme | AABB CCDD EEFF GGHH IIJJ KKLL MMNN OOPP AAQQ |
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Poetic Form | Quatrain |
Metre | 10010110 1101110 11111111 1110001101 11100101 11110111 11111011111 010101011110 1101101001 110110110101 11111111001 10100101101 1110101111 01011111 011111101 11011110101 11100011010011 01111110101 11011111101 101001110101 11111001 1101011110001 0111001010011 101011111101 111101111011 101011011011011 011101110010 1101100011010 111011101 11011100001 1111100101001 1110101010111 11011101010 1110111010 11011111 01000110101 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 1,605 |
Words | 334 |
Sentences | 26 |
Stanzas | 9 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4 |
Lines Amount | 36 |
Letters per line (avg) | 34 |
Words per line (avg) | 8 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 137 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 33 |
About this poem
This is a poem written by me in the fall of twenty eighteen, about self-esteem and reflection.
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Written on September 13, 2018
Submitted by Mystiquez on January 18, 2023
Modified on April 13, 2023
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