Analysis of Barbed Words



That is the hardest thingBeing seenConsideredKnown I want to be known
Let my name be known
Will they consider me?
Here I amStagnant and repugnantAffection is meaninglessWords are hollow
Allow me to mimic this affectionHollowPointlessBluntedMeaningless I desire to be desired
I want to be ALIVE
Breathing Living Feelingevery scorned word and phraseUnsaid and unspokenineffectual wordstorture me
Don’t placate me
your truth
want you to tip toeBreak melet me cryfeelsomething Anything


Scheme AABCDEBBFG
Poetic Form Etheree  (30%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 110101111111 11111 110101 1110111110 01111011101011010 111101 1010111010111 1101 11 1111111110
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 487
Words 67
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 41
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 410
Words per stanza (avg) 66

About this poem

This is about spiraling anxiety.

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Written on December 08, 2020

Submitted by bennettm.22202 on January 18, 2023

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Benny McCluskey

Benny is an actor, and writer. They are recent graduate of the University of Memphis with a degree in theatre. Some of their interests include Dungeons and Dragons and Tarot Reading. more…

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