Analysis of Mind



Speakin' directly.. want u understanding' me.. baby u got my heart.. fiendin' you drastically..

yea been down, and now not used to where I used to be..but strange as the circumstance, confinement brought the opportunity of You and me...

and so much distraction/ chaos of people u may invest in which never pays off.. same, -all....just want u to stay under, just so they could write ya name off.. but when we cliqued up, we shook the hate off.. them hata'z shook cuz they ain't seen love.. when they seen it real they said " how can we disrupt?" but impenetrable.. what we got came from the highest, your the one righteous opportunity and ur words and grips the nicest.. perfect lips.. and eyes-just, pull me in the tightest.. gravitational.. figured me out, seen I was complicated..though- still stayed and noticed more than ur looks and seen the sophistication...

the opportunity to have ya by my side, and me by yours.. I couldn't lose it, learned to respect more..not just hear u but listen to ya.. more I did, turned out u somebody I wanna risk my neck for.. been through, who- most-cant-say-they-got -through.. u had opportunity as well but chose the harder roads in which u fought through.. and still narcotics in the way, along with the toxic association's.. all as u locked up but not afraid, all you conquered and luckiest man am cuz I got You..

while I've dwelled on the past opportunities.. I've passed up..which led to years of trials, addiction, ridicule ect.. I'd do it again for the opportunity to holla at you and find all my life needed.. and to see your smile as u looked at me..im blessed fucked off those opportunities... there was no other scenario other than OURS.. powers that be.. no way to explain..other than God! simple and plain..your all I dwell on.. your all I care for.. your all I wanna blossom with.. when. the opportunity arises.. I'll be going in for alotta kisses.. (pt 2)


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Characters 1,914
Words 354
Sentences 45
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 5
Letters per line (avg) 288
Words per line (avg) 67
Letters per stanza (avg) 288
Words per stanza (avg) 67
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Submitted by dnaj3334 on January 17, 2023

Modified on March 05, 2023

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