Analysis of Offloaded Clean



What is the age of reality
how many birthdays is that

Peaked hats and streamers wrapping the truth
candles relighting the facts

Wishing for the ultimate void
our consciousness offloaded clean

Clearing the way for the square root of now
—its present regifting the dream

(Dreamsleep: January, 2023)


Scheme AX XX XX XX A
Poetic Form
Metre 1101110 110111 110101001 10101 10101001 1010011 1001101111 110101 1100
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 303
Words 52
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 9
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 49
Words per stanza (avg) 10
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on January 11, 2023

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Kurt Philip Behm

Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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