Analysis of Stay, Woman, Stay



Stay, Woman, Stay

"Who do you run to when your only saviour is the one you're running from?"

Hymn for the woman who almost stayed...

You tell me he broke you again today  
Tell me why you’ll stay
For love or fear or something grey

If you love me you’d stay
This is what he’d say
For shame he will betray

Stay, woman, stay.
Give your life away
I’ll love you anyway

But if you leave
Goddess, please
Know how free you deserve to be

For the love of you
Crazy and subdued
Come with me

In love we don’t weep
Here we get to sleep
We only breathe in peace

Let me show you peace
I will keep you safe
I am your inner sage

But if you with him stay
I’ll love you anyway                                                                                            
With you I'll always pray.                                                                              

But if you want to stay
Stay with me stay
I will show you the way    

Out with the poison you crave   
The clown is just a phase
The light is in your face

Let's return to faith  
Stay with me stay
I will show you the way                                                              

WolfeSound -  @wolfesound


Scheme A x x aaa aaa AaA xxb xxb ccd dxx aAa aAA xxx xAA a
Poetic Form
Metre 1101 11111111011011101 11010111 1111110101 11111 11111101 111111 11111 111101 1101 11101 11110 1111 101 11110111 10111 10001 111 01111 11111 110101 11111 11111 111101 111111 11110 11111 111111 1111 111101 1101011 011101 011011 10111 1111 111101 11
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,219
Words 237
Sentences 7
Stanzas 15
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 1
Lines Amount 37
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 47
Words per stanza (avg) 13

About this poem

A hymn for women feeling stuck in an abusive relationship.

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Written on December 01, 2022

Submitted by jswolfe on December 10, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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