Analysis of Shattered



It’s hard to forget someone who gave you so much to remember
every now and then we found that special one
they say love speak no language
your eyes use to talk to me in codes that no one else could read

I’m sadden like I’ve never been before
the life I’ve new in a million pieces
feeling I will never get back to the me I use to be
my yesterday is a closed door, I don’t live there anymore
I once read, humans originally had two faces
four arms, four legs and they were happy like that, complete
then the humans livid the gods
the gods split us in two as punishment torn us away from our other halves
each of us when separated is always looking for our other halves it’s our nature  
when one is met with his other halve the pair gets lost in an amazement of love, friendship, intimacy
one will not be seeing out of the others sight
human nature was once originally one, and we were hole
the desire and the pursued of the hole are called love  

You where my hole, my best friend, my alpha, and omega
you said the most beautiful things in life are not things
they’re people, places, memories, picture,
they’re feelings, moments, smiles, laughter
I trusted, believed, loved you
when something breaks and the pieces are large enough, you can fix it
unfortunately, sometimes things don’t break, they shatter
but when you let the light in shatter glass will glitter and, in those moments,
I’ll remember just how beautiful we were

Written by
NJ Kriel.


Scheme AXXX BCDBCXXXADXEX XXAAXXAXA XE
Poetic Form
Metre 111011111111010 100101111101 1111110 111111101111111 1101110101 0111001010 101110111011111 1101011111101 11110010001110 1111010101101 10101001 01110111001101110101 1111100111011010111010 11111110101110101011101000 111110110101 1010110100010101 00100001101111 11111111100010 1101100101111 1101010010 11010110 1100111 1101001011011111 0100001111110 111101010111000110 10101110010 101 11
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,489
Words 285
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 13, 9, 2
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 41
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 285
Words per stanza (avg) 67

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When a heart is broken it's hard to get to the person you once were

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Written on December 21, 2022

Submitted by njhendricks1109 on December 28, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Natasha Jolene Hendricks

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