Analysis of Emma



Heaven sent a little girl,
With skin of cream,
And hair of curl.
Soon tiny feet began to walk,
Her ruby lips began to talk.
I watched her grow through toddler times,
Through Barney shows and nursery rhymes.
We grinned and giggled, danced and played,
And I praised God, for she he made.
But then one morning when she rose,
I saw her tiny little toes,
Refused to let her dance once more,
Or move her feet upon the floor.
My little girl was deathly ill,
There was no magic healing pill.
I lost my hope and courage too.
There was nothing that I could do.
The doctors said as time went by,
She'd loose abilities, then die.
But my sweet girl was brave and bold,
She didn't care what she was told.
Her body fails more each day,
But she can laugh and she can pray!
And though she cannot dance on feet,
She boogies to another beat.
Compassion, empathy and grace,
Is what she wears upon her face.
Despite her pain, she smiles bright,
And those in darkness see her light.
Someday I pray my girl can see,
How much her joy has strengthened me.


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Poetic Form
Metre 1010101 1111 0111 11010111 01010111 11011101 110101001 11010101 01111111 11110111 11010101 01110111 11010101 11011101 11110101 11110101 11101111 01011111 11010011 11111101 11011111 0101111 11110111 01110111 1110101 01010001 11110101 0101111 01010101 1111111 11011101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,031
Words 227
Sentences 15
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 31
Lines Amount 31
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 796
Words per stanza (avg) 197

About this poem

My daughter Emma was diagnosed with a terminal illness at the age of five. She is now 18 and is quadriplegic, but she has a strong heart of love and empathy for everyone she meets despite her trials and prognosis. I am truly blessed to be her mom.

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Written on December 12, 2021

Submitted by secondhandhippie on December 08, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Hannah Lazicki

My name is Hannah. I am a single, home-schooling mom of four children, three of which have life-threatening disabilities. We live in the beautiful, forested northeastern corner of Washington state. I love the Lord Jesus Christ and enjoy serving in children's ministry at my church. When I am not home schooling or volunteering, I love hiking, kayaking, foraging, writing, learning languages and caring for our twenty-four animals. Thank you for reading my poetry! more…

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