Analysis of Come alive

Riaan Smit 1988 (Windhoek)



Bent my mind
And it won’t bend back
I have walked down a one way track
Now I'm feeling, and breathing lord
I'm alive, I'm alive!

I’ve been all caught up in this mindless magical maze
Not where to go because there's more than a million ways
If i live until die, let me die with my life
Until my time is over I'm alive

Life I have
I hold dear
Even when
It's all unclear
How I
How I will survive
All I know, is I’m alive


Scheme XAAXB CCXB XDXDXBB
Poetic Form
Metre 111 01111 11110111 11100101 101101 1111101101001 1111011110101 111011111111 0111110101 111 111 101 1101 11 11101 1111101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 426
Words 92
Sentences 2
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 7
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 105
Words per stanza (avg) 29
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Written on December 21, 2018

Submitted by tribeone_b on January 04, 2023

Modified on March 05, 2023

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