Analysis of My person
Hesmyperson 1999
“He’s my person”. I whisper to myself to justify this feeling.
This feeling of security. Safety. Warmth.
But also the feeling of attachment- abandonment and hurt.
He hurts me so good. I’m addicted to the pain inflicted time after time.
The desire to go back- the need to feel wanted-seen.
You see me. You SEEN me.
Now. We’re just back to strangers.
Strangers who once shared a love that was so loud - silence was forbidden.
Strangers that could transfer our energies with just a stare into each others eyes.
I need you. I’ve adapted to you. I studied you. I invested myself into you.
I’ve learned your triggers, your soft spots.
I can’t unlearn you, I can’t unlove you.
How is this so easy to you?
How is it so easy? So easy to not love me after what we shared?
I wanted you to feel safe with me,
Be able to share anything with me
To be your peace
No questions, no judgement
Your happiness fulfills me. Your happiness brings me happiness
I’m all for you
“He’s my person” I say. I think it while asleep and mumble it while I’m driving. Sometime a smirk may linger on my face after thinking it.
How can you desire a person? Deep down soul crave a person?
Not all sexually but mentally too?
Maybe because you get me.
We vibe EASILY
I notice the smallest things about you.
The way you lean back when you laugh, the way you lick your lips while caressing your beard.
The way you smoke —-whew baby!
The veins in your hands,
the way you walk,
The laughs we shared,
The deep conversations,
I love it all. I love you.
My person.
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Metre | 111011011110110 11010100101 1100101010010001 1111110101010101101 00101110111101 111111 1011110 10111011111101100 101101101001101011101 111101011110110101011 11110111 11111111 11111011 111110110111110111 110111111 110111011 1111 110110 1100011110011100 1111 1110111111010101111010111011110101 1110100101111010 11100011001 1001111 11100 1100101011 01111111011111101011 0111110 01011 0111 0111 01010 1111111 110 |
Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
Characters | 1,567 |
Words | 315 |
Sentences | 39 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 34 |
Lines Amount | 34 |
Letters per line (avg) | 34 |
Words per line (avg) | 8 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 1,166 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 287 |
About this poem
This freestyle poem is about someone who makes me feel at home. They say, “home is where the heart is” He is my home. ❤️
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Written on December 28, 2022
Submitted by Hesmyperson on December 28, 2022
Modified by Hesmyperson on December 28, 2022
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