Analysis of Loss Of Consciousness



The best ways these days,
To identify if your consciousness stays.
Kept to remain as healthy as possible?
Is the knowing to feel...
Offended, insulted and disrespected.
When anyone,
Intentionally steps on your toes.

However...
If this is done.
And you discover yourself,
Requesting it to do again and again.
As if the sensation begins to turn you on.
Curling those toes with a thrill?

Something is wrong.
That does not belong.

Although kept to stay in your mind,
You have been made convinced...
This act to do to you purposely,
Is a sign of affection.
Proving not only a loss of consciousness.
But also a desperate need for attention to get.

And in these confusing,
Publicly displaying of craze days.
Many are out to seek,
Pain.
A pain some commit to permit,
In their relationships!
With a feeling,
To be needed, wanted and loved!


Scheme AAXXXBX XBXXXX CC XXXBXX DAXXXXDX
Poetic Form
Metre 01111 1010111001 11011101100 101011 0100100010 110 010001111 10 1111 0101001 01011101001 110010011111 1011101 1011 11101 1111011 111101 111111100 1011010 10110011100 1100101101011 001010 100010111 101111 1 01101101 01010 1010 11101001
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 834
Words 177
Sentences 20
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 7, 6, 2, 6, 8
Lines Amount 29
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 130
Words per stanza (avg) 29
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Written on December 10, 2022

Submitted by lpahtillah on December 10, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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