Analysis of Fasting

Richard Groff 1957 (Pottstown, Pa.)



Fasting for the will of God
Is something to be admired
Lord, you’re speaking to my heart
Not preaching to the choir

Convict me Lord for all my sins
And lack of self-control
Fill me with your presence
Holy Spirit make me whole

Cast out all the demons
Who are trying to steal my soul
Teach me in your ways to stand
So, I can play my role

Walk across the water, heal the sick
And raise the dead
Open up my mind dear Lord
But please don’t crush my head
 


Scheme XXXX XAXA XAXA XBXB
Poetic Form Quatrain  (75%)
Metre 1010111 11011010 1110111 1101010 10111111 011101 111110 1010111 111010 11101111 1101111 111111 101010101 0101 1011111 111111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 457
Words 94
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 88
Words per stanza (avg) 23
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Written on May 05, 2010

Submitted by dawg4jesus on December 09, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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