Analysis of Seasons

Michael J Hill 1948 (Devon)



When the wondrous heat of Summer, has begun to fade away,
And the first  great shower of Summer rain, deigns to invade our day.
The petrichor, such fragrant aroma, delights our sense of smell,
And man, woman, and child all know, that everything is well.

When leaves and flowers have gently drooped, and birds less  sing.
’Tis then mens feelings, lightly turn to thoughts  of love, not Spring.
As the dark of night, much earlier, closes in to end our day,
Migrating birds have taken flight, to find warmth  far away.

The rainclouds start to form, the old North wind begins to blow,
It forces in the coldness, that predicts the fall of snow.
Then Christmas songs resound around the shops in every town,
And money is spent on presents, so that no-one gets let down.

Then soon, that Christmas cheer is gone. and Wintertime sets in,
With chilly New Year winds, with frost and snow it all wears thin.
Iced up windscreens, iced up locks, and cars that fail to start,
Sliding your car to work, has now, become a work of art.

But it’s not a time to be depressed, it won’t last, very long,
Spring will be here very soon, with birds all in fine song.
The land will fill with lovely sights, of flowers and leaves anew,
With landscapes well bedecked with flora, all of wondrous hue.

The land will glow with Spring delight, the sun will shine so bright,
Getting stronger every day, then comes the shorter night.
With Spring rains gone and smells afresh, life is great it’s plain,
As the land warms up and people too, Summer’s here again.

Michael J Hill © February 2020


Scheme AABB CCAA DDEE FFGG HHII JJXX X
Poetic Form
Metre 101011101011101 00111011011101101 011100100110111 0110011111011 1101011010111 11110101111111 10111110010011101 1011101111101 0111101110111 11000101010111 11011010101001 010111101111111 1111011101010 11011111011111 111111011111 10111111010111 111011101111101 1111101111011 011111011100101 1110111011101 01111101011111 10101001110101 1111010111111 10111010110101 1011100
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,581
Words 314
Sentences 15
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 48
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 172
Words per stanza (avg) 41

About this poem

As I've grown older I have become so aware of the seasons seeming to pass faster. I thought I would put this into words and this is what I came up with.

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Written on February 02, 2020

Submitted by michaeljhill48 on November 11, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:34 min read
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Michael J Hill

A BIT ABOUT ME. 1964-69 Police Officer in Devon. 69- 2013 Various Child care appointments, mostly in management. Lectured in Child Care. Heavily involved in staff training. Gained Child Care qualification. Gained a 2.1 Degree in Psychology, followed by a 2.1 Degree in Sociology. Took various courses to become Health and Safety Supervisor/Inspector. Became NVQ Child Care supervisor/assessor. I also attended a course on facial recognition and body language, which opened my eyes to all manner of new understanding of people and their behaviours. I became a Christian in 1991 and since thinly life and my outlook on have have massively changed I took early retirement in 2003 since which I write poetry, short stories and booklets. I paint, draw, and have a positive outlook on life. I had a major stroke in 2014 and for three years I was in a Care Home. I’m now partially disabled but living independently. Nothing can hold back any ideas I have for the future. MY future!!!!. Don’t let worries or drawbacks hold you back! more…

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