Analysis of Searching for the right route, root



Along the path a route I choose,
Finding my way, I cannot lose.
Following the path upon the trail,
Keeping up the pace I begins to sail.

The route I seek is often found,
Neither here nor there is always around.
Whether trail or water the river flows,
Into the unknown one never knows.

The journey now taken deep within,
The path that’s chosen the root begins.
Looking up the vast tree’s height,
Looking for the top is out of sight.

The roots now exposed the soil gone,
A vast system the heart of tree belongs.
Weaving its way into the ground,
Circling the tree, the roots often found

Through wind and rain erosion feared,
The life of the trees the end is near.
Along the river the creek flows,
Into every crevasse new life grows.

The route the river the water ceased,
Weather and climate warming increased.
The ground is parched, creeks run dry,
Looking above in a cloudless sky.

Following along the parched riverbed,
Looking for the route where the footsteps lead.
The river of rock, gravel and clay,
The rains, the river of life appears one day.

Studying, searching for the right route,
Observing the life each day we lose.
Maintaining the forests keeps us alive,
Roots beneath in the forest to thrive.


Scheme AABB CCDD XXEE XXCC XXDD FFGG HHII XAJJ
Poetic Form Quatrain  (50%)
Metre 01010111 10111101 100010101 1010110111 01111101 101111101 1011100101 010011101 010110101 011100101 1010111 101011111 01101011 0110011101 10110101 1000101101 11010101 011010111 01010011 011001111 010100101 100101001 0111111 100100101 100010110 101011011 010111001 01010110111 100101011 010011111 0100101101 101001011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,216
Words 253
Sentences 15
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 119
Words per stanza (avg) 27

About this poem

walking the trials as urban development encroaches , fewer trees are seen as the creeks dry up.

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Written on November 26, 2022

Submitted by silverbb53 on November 27, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:15 min read
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Chris Goddard

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