Analysis of mood swing



my moods live on that swing
can never tell what it will bring
all my joy... lost
all my positivity... gone
i feel anger, pain, stress
my emotions burst
the more i think about it
the more it gets worse
i feel like a burden
i feel like a failure
slit my wrist
im the cut creator
up my sleeves
cuts and gashes
im nothing but abuse
watch me hanging from that tree
with my neck wrapped in a noose
does anyone care?
will anyone see?
corbin will suffer
everyone will fly free
"are you okay? for you, im there!"
"its nothing, just a mood swing"
"i swear"


Scheme AABCDEFGHIJIKLMNMONINOAO
Poetic Form
Metre 111111 11011111 1111 1111 111011 10101 0111011 01111 111010 111010 111 101010 111 1010 110101 1110111 1111001 1101 1101 10110 10111 1111111 1101011 11
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 547
Words 112
Sentences 7
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 24
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 419
Words per stanza (avg) 108
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Submitted by on December 06, 2022

Modified on April 12, 2023

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