Analysis of Many Claim Wanted



Many claim wanted.
But they can't find love.
'They can't find what?'
They can't find love.
'Can't find what?'
They can't find love.
Love, love, love LOVE!

Many claim wanted.
But they can't find joy.
'They can't find what?'
Joy!
Or happiness,
To feel it real.

'No one can not know,
To be known to find.
Only on their minds undefined.
No one can not know,
Unfelt to find.
To believe it to be given,
With a smile brighter than the Sun shines!
If love to have felt to feel,
Is not real?

No one loving is going to await anticipating,
If a performance of love...
Is worth the price,
To escape away from an imitation faked!
Love known to know it,
Takes a slow bloom from the inside.
And recognized prepared to pluck.
By another lucky enough,
Knowing they have that 'IT'...
Invited to do the plucking!'

So...
Love to give and receive,
Is a mutual seductive activity?

'Well...
That depends on one's expectations.
You see...
High expectations to keep.
After that seductive activity,
Has been accomplished to reach?
It is most important,
To revisit and reminisce that memory...
Once left to leave you breathless?

Try not to attempt that peak sought to reach.
Everyday of the week, month and year.
Until you hear unexpectedly,
From your lover, mate or spouse.
Claiming to have a headache,
Heard when you enter the house.
Rushing to the bathroom to take a shower!'

I don't understand what you are saying.

'Listen and carefully.
Am I that one,
Having to explain to you...
The reason why I have a headache?'

What does that have to do,
With sharing my love with another?
Accepting and approving of it?

'Have you ever heard,
That a putting all your eggs in one basket...
Sooner or later begins to bore,
The basket holder?'

No.
What sense does that make?

'Don't leave your lover, mate or spouse,
Making excuses to leave the house.
Claiming to go and find,
Something different to go with dinner.
While you are taking a shower.
Humming.
In anticipation!'

You say some of the most crazy stuff.

'So I've been told.
Always before and not after,
The humming abruptly stops.
And arguments start over thoughtlessness!'

Thoughtlessness?
Oh...
So now you're calling me thoughtless?

"Not yet.
It took me a long time.
To examine,
Love to have is more lasting.
Than peaks to reach,
With no breath left fooling myself...
I could keep repeating endlessly.'


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Poetic Form
Metre 10110 11111 1111 1111 111 1111 1111 10110 11111 1111 1 1100 1111 11111 11111 1011101 11111 111 10111110 101101011 1111111 111 11101101010100 1001011 1101 10101110101 11111 10111001 0100111 10101001 101111 01011010 1 111001 101000100100 1 10111010 11 101011 1010100100 1101011 111010 10100011100 1111110 1110111111 101101101 01110100 1110111 101101 1111001 1010111010 110111110 100100 1111 1010111 01011101 111111 110111010 010001011 11101 10101110110 101100111 01010 1 11111 11110111 100101101 101101 1010011110 11110010 10 00010 111101101 1111 1010110 0100101 01001101 1 1 11110110 11 111011 1010 1111110 1111 1111101 111010100
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 2,353
Words 526
Sentences 65
Stanzas 17
Stanza Lengths 7, 6, 9, 10, 3, 9, 7, 1, 4, 3, 4, 2, 7, 1, 4, 3, 7
Lines Amount 87
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 104
Words per stanza (avg) 24
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Written on November 27, 2022

Submitted by lpahtillah on November 27, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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