Analysis of My Cup

AJ White 1966 (Maryland)



As I sipped my cup
From across the dimly lit room
I could see the sky caressing the moon
and life winked his eye
As he and time danced into the night
I took another sip
of my concocted cup
Reminiscing
Maybe trying to figure out how I'd lost my time
Laughed, chuckled did I...
or was that a howl?
Do you have something for discombobulation?
Mondays slip into Tuesdays
Weeks into years
What can I take for agitation?
So again I sip my cup of...
Concocted, mixed, Shaken... not stirred, fully spiced
Life!


Scheme ABCDEFAGHDICJKLMNO
Poetic Form
Metre 11111 10101011 1110101001 01111 110110101 110101 110101 010 1010110111111 11011 11101 1111011 101011 1011 11111010 10111111 01011011101 1
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 502
Words 99
Sentences 7
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 18
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 391
Words per stanza (avg) 94
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Submitted by aj_w on November 15, 2022

Modified on March 31, 2023

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