Analysis of YOU DO NOT GET ENJOYMENT OUT OF FUCKING THE ALREADY FUCKED

mad hippie poet 1974 (new jersey)



You do not get enjoyment out of fucking the already fucked the sun is burning out the brightness of the stars falling from the already fading skies

If you take the time to piss your life away you will quickly miss the test you ask me how I am I reply I am dead inside your simple answer as always is that is so nice to hear

You do not get enjoyment out of not knowing the unknown or fucking the town's whore anymore like you did so many times before. you start to see to this humanity you are becoming a threat because you are not from this world. you think you are better than everyone you ever met and the person you are is the one who you forget

Keep telling yourself that this is not how your life was meant to be the changes must be made inside of your dreams

You want to be famous you want to be loved you do what they want you to do you give them your all you give them your priceless soul with a million-dollar smile

They tell you to take a number your number son is 5 trillion so sit back relax wait for inline your the lucky one for all you have is time if you decide to go nowhere


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Characters 1,096
Words 228
Sentences 3
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 6
Letters per line (avg) 144
Words per line (avg) 37
Letters per stanza (avg) 144
Words per stanza (avg) 37

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MY EARLY YEARS OF POETRY

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Submitted by Oakley on November 13, 2022

Modified by Oakley on December 18, 2022

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I have been writing for 40 years my poetry is about life,death love,and redemption. after having two near death expiercences and a TBI my poetry has become more spirtual more…

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