Analysis of "The Iron Scent of Paris Roses."

Elizabeth Rose Belier 1989 (Paris)



The valley of the Paris roses,
longest life without the poses,
old as hell is old as Moses,
longest life with Paris roses,
when you write you get a fist,
when you try you always missed,
fly the kite that talks to twist,
when you write you get a fist,
old the ball you'll always lose,
baby base of milk you choose,
adults and children never try,
only animals live in eye,
only oceans in pacific Paris,
cherish those who always play,
if they make a noose you always pay,
if you cry you die inside the day,
cherish those who always try,
cry inside the tidal simple,
in adolescents its always pimple,
play with lights together trying,
get the tad of gravy dying,
right the wrongs retired baby,
Paris Roses invented rights,
Paris Roses in moonlit nights,
Paris Roses I'm always free,
with Paris Roses its a Destiny,
of dying hell in eternal flames,
but just for me its Heavens Games.
Selah.


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Poetic Form
Metre 010101010 10101010 11111110 10111010 1111101 111111 1011111 1111101 101111 1011111 01010101 10100101 1010001010 101111 11101111 111110101 101111 10101010 00101110 11101010 10111010 1010110 10100101 1010011 1010111 1101010100 110100101 11111101 1
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 908
Words 191
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 29
Lines Amount 29
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 692
Words per stanza (avg) 163

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Written on November 10, 2022

Submitted by elizabethrosebelier on November 10, 2022

Modified by elizabethrosebelier on November 10, 2022

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