Analysis of We touch lives



We are blood thirsty ravenous wolves Hungry for a difference we are mad We want to make a difference

Bees have hives We have knives We seek not high fives we want to change lives

We won't come in the name of motivational speakers Cause They let us take so much heed Like it's some sacred creed Making us feel so guilty of our greed And repenting from our weed

Eyes wide open Heart so profound and Mind ready to amend

With attention this drawn Are you listening or you are hearing We wonder

Do these words really abide Or maybe you just throw them aside Cause we still have people committing

Emmanuel Kant once said: Live your life as though your every act were to become a universal law Is it possible to let his words slide down our hearts or just sink deep in our minds and the meaning reflect all the way out

We want man and woman, Old and young That will support initiatives which offer solutions to our pressing problems

We want to wake up tomorrow and see a young man that knows that a belt helps prevent sagging and is not a tool for suicide

Men and women that appreciate the value of their black melanin and not endorse gecko complexion

Women that understand that there is nun but luring beauty in nakedness One that leads into temptation

Lets make an impact One that will last We have long awaited for change Change for a better and brighter tomorrow
lets change lives


Scheme X A X X X X X X X B B XA
Poetic Form
Metre 111101001101010011111110100 1111111111111111 1110011010010111111111111011011110110100101101 111011010110101 1010111110011110110 1111001110111101111110010 0100111111111100101010010111100111111101111101010010011011 111010101110101001100101101010 111110101011111011011001101110 10101010010111100010110010 101011111110100111101010 111011111111010111101001001 111
Characters 1,388
Words 269
Sentences 1
Stanzas 12
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 2
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 86
Words per line (avg) 20
Letters per stanza (avg) 93
Words per stanza (avg) 22

About this poem

This poem is about making a positive impact in life

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Written on May 24, 2022

Submitted by mercymukuka026 on October 17, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Mercy Mukuka

I am a Zambian aged 19. I love reading novels and coming up with writings especially poetry. I love learning and making discoveries. Socially, I am an ambivert. That's all I can say for now. You are free to ask more. more…

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