Analysis of The guardians of the country

Dr anusha 1993 (Karnataka)



Peacefully resting in their abode,
Gets a call for  helping hand!
Departed from their home for the orders to abide,
Fearless souls were born in that land!

Horror nights in warzone seems endless..
Bravery of  soldiers is limitless
Physically and mentally wounded..
Still they stand undaunted!

They fight back standing together
Don't take a step back whatever be the weather..
The outrage within them, heats up their core..
To fulfill the oath, that they had once swore..

Even in the freezing cold..
Their devotion never grows old!
They smile to hide their pain..
Never let their strife go in vain..

It was a War for freedom...
To put an end to gruesome..
Releasing neighbouring country from slavery,
Indian army  put an end to their misery..

Courageously they marched ahead for the rescue mission,
To save their mother nation ..
The army represented our country as one..
Despite all hardships, the war was won!!
Finally after 13 days..
Indian military won it with ace..

Honoured they were with
Param vir chakra award..
Motherindia' flag  was seen flying high..
What more could be a better reward..

Day in and day out they guard our country..
To cease enemies' entry!
However difficult it seems still they try,
Though they know someday they might die..

In Warfield they finally become immortal...
Hence comes to  end, a soldier's life' hurdle..!!

Its a story of people born to serve..
Immense respect and honour they deserve..
It's been 50yrs since the indo -pak 1971 war...
We can still hear the victory roar!!


Scheme XAXA BBXX CCDD EEFF GGHH IIIIXX XJKJ HHKK LL MMDD
Poetic Form Etheree  (20%)
Metre 100100101 1011101 0101111010101 10101011 10101110 1001101100 1000010010 111010 11110010 11011101010 010111111 1010111111 1000101 10101011 111111 10111101 1101110 1111110 0101101100 1001011111100 01001101101010 1111010 010010101011 011100111 100101 1001001111 1101 11101 1111101 111101001 10011111010 1110010 1010011111 1111111 010110001010 1111010110 1010110111 010101101 111101011 111101001
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,522
Words 300
Sentences 32
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 6, 4, 4, 2, 4
Lines Amount 40
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 117
Words per stanza (avg) 26

About this poem

It's about the Indo Pak war of 1971, it describes the dedication of a soldier and the love and sacrifice that he does to safeguard his country and the citizens of the nation

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Written on October 30, 2021

Submitted by anunaikswathi on October 18, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Dr anusha

I am Dr Anusha Naik, a Physician. I come from place udupi in karnataka, I have been writing short poems as a hobby more…

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