Analysis of The Absent Dimension



Like clock hands
Retraveling spaces
Departures are arrivals
Never the same

Far from my famished stride
The path rests
Obliged and tame

To run,
And run
In circles
In vain

To breathe
To breed
Ticks off the game
Alien to this dizzy frame

To be
Timeless, with no guilt to claim
Spaceless, with no one to blame


Scheme XXAB XXB CCAX XXBB XBB
Poetic Form
Metre 111 110 0101010 1001 111101 011 0101 11 01 010 01 11 11 1101 10011101 11 1011111 111111
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 310
Words 63
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 3, 4, 4, 3
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 14
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 49
Words per stanza (avg) 11

About this poem

It's about alienation, estrangement, and being led astray by life's rules

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Written on September 01, 2022

Submitted by areejeweida on September 30, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Areej Eweida

Rocket Scientist by academic education, Data Scientist by profession, a part-time Computer Science student by day, and a bibliophile by night and heart. more…

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