Analysis of Tangled knots



Moving past those city lights
Frantically running from my inner fights
Going far away from the road of disbelief,
Trying to understand the disgrace of human sights.

It's easy for someone to say to ignore
Where you, standing in a throng who is ready to provoke.
That one night when i begged the god
to heal my heart,
To finish the setback and clear the scars.
Wishing for people to understand my art,
And enlightenment of peace which will be ours.

And here I am setting ny own boundaries,
Because I am to nervous to stop in the horrid state where it never cease.
Walking on that stranded pile of thoughts,
Finally trying to unstrangle those knots.


Scheme AAXA XXXBXBX XXXX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 1011101 10001011101 10101101101 101010011101 1101111101 11100011110101 11111101 1111 110010101 1011010111 001001111110 01111011100 0111110110010111101 101110111 100101111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 648
Words 129
Sentences 6
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 7, 4
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 172
Words per stanza (avg) 39

About this poem

I wrote this poem because I know how it feels to be in a place where everything around you seems to be against you. Thats numbness, that feeling one cannot explain is so difficult to overcome, but I just want to let this out to people so that they know that it's normal. Sometimes poeple just need time to acknowledge themselves because you never know what they are going through. Everyone, take some time to acknowledge yourself and get to know what are your inner hustle and fight it out. It's your race, you gotta win it. 

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Written on October 01, 2022

Submitted by mansi.attri.sharma on October 09, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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