Analysis of Self -reliance

Susmita bishnu Majumdar 1976 (Bongaigaon)



When the ocean meets the Sky in an uninterrupted way and bears me to the beamy  Sky
I waery of my existence  n took a streamy  attachment to the high
When the fish glide  swiftly,
Robin whistle in the morning Sun
Daisy buds blossom  to the sky
From the  intense  to the Sun
I Send;
Kindle my heart with thy light to the end
The wind talks me about my goal ,thus compose my soul
The guy harmony of the birds round them
Undisturbed  by earthly sight they see
Only attached with love n sympathy
Hills are standing in unity
WITH joy wind perform its duty
I Llost listening  the waves Watching  how mountains  behave
Oh, once more severely clear a cry of mine I heat
Oh, lord kindle my heart with thy light
to the end;
Bounded by self desire, busy with tasks n power
Unregardful in God's kingdom at this hour
Now,my heart desire for  the path of light
Where Ye call me through the music  of night:


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Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 921
Words 189
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 22
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 700
Words per stanza (avg) 183

About this poem

WHEREVER I gaze upon the Nature such as the ocean meeting the mighty sky,fish glide, Robin's whistle my heart yearns for beauty or Nature 's bounty. Also I regret avoiding God's kingdom where Mother Nature is so soothing to all mankind.But my heart cries in intense to be with the Nature 's bounty.

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Written on October 14, 2022

Submitted by susmibmd on October 14, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Susmita bishnu Majumdar

Born 27th Dec,1976 Bongaigaon Assam Pen name :Tumpa Occupation :social worker Education Post graduate in English more…

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