Analysis of O My mountain king Karol



O My mountain king Karol
you are so wonderful soul.
When this world rejected
you happily adopted.
O my Mountain king Karol
you are so wonderful soul.
When this world rejected
you happily adopted.
O my Mountain king Karol
you are so wonderful soul.
O my Mountain king Karol
you are so wonderful soul.
O my Mountain king Karol.

Whenever wake up in the morning
you're the only one smiling.
Whenever wake up in the morning
you're the only one smiling.
Holding up sun-lamp on your head
lighting up pretty world with red.
Holding up sun-lamp on your head
lighting up pretty world with red.
Offered the water for the sun
Offered the water for the sun
you took bath with sun my dad
O my Mountain king Karol
you are so wonderful soul.
When this world rejected
you happily adopted.
O my Mountain king Karol
you are so wonderful soul.
When this world rejected
you happily adopted.
O my Mountain king Karol
you are so wonderful soul.
O my Mountain king Karol
you are so wonderful soul.
O my Mountain king Karol.

Whenever tired of big work load
lifting up my big head off road.
Whenever tired of big work load
lifting up my big head off road.
Seeing you steady 'n untired
I can't stop working on board.
Seeing you steady 'n untired
I can't stop working on board.
Holy spring of karmyoga
Holy spring of karmyoga
rush-flowing from you my lord.
O my Mountain king Karol
you are so wonderful soul.
When this world rejected
you happily adopted.
O my Mountain king Karol
you are so wonderful soul.
When this world rejected
you happily adopted.
O my Mountain king Karol
you are so wonderful soul.
O my Mountain king Karol
you are so wonderful soul.
O my Mountain king Karol.

All the relatids have gone changed
whole world too has gone up changed.
All the relatids have gone changed
whole world too has gone up changed.
Screened the whole circle of friends
time enslaved them in his hands.
Screened the whole circle of friends
time enslaved them in his hands.
Lucky to have a friend like you
Lucky to have a friend like you
mind-sweet in the form of thou.
O my Mountain king Karol
you are so wonderful soul.
When this world rejected
you happily adopted.
O my Mountain king Karol
you are so wonderful soul.
When this world rejected
you happily adopted.
O my Mountain king Karol
you are so wonderful soul.
O my Mountain king Karol
you are so wonderful soul.
O my Mountain king Karol.

Holding up stay at top abodes
you are the deity of all gods.
Holding up stay at top abodes
you are the deity of all gods.
Up-rising from the muladhar root
thrilled on the sahasrar nodes.
Up-rising from the muladhar root
thrilled on the sahasrar nodes.
All these gods together with you
All these gods together with you
made just cute one looking like you.
O my Mountain king Karol
you are so wonderful soul.
When this world rejected
you happily adopted.
O my Mountain king Karol
you are so wonderful soul.
When this world rejected
you happily adopted.
O my Mountain king Karol
you are so wonderful soul.
O my Mountain king Karol
you are so wonderful soul.
O my Mountain king Karol.

Hairy herbs are inside thou
snake peacock 'n human crow.
Hairy herbs are inside thou
snake peacock 'n human crow.
Ganges streams and Water-fall
third eye the grue-some pit-fall .
Ganges streams and Water-fall
third eye the grue-some pit-fall.

Pretty look has crown of moon
draws always this my mind soon.
Pretty look has crown of moon
draws always this my mind soon.
Sub-mountain up to the base
Nandi bull being ready for race.
Sub-mountain up to the base
Nandi bull being ready for race.

Lightening looks Gaura on you
thundering glistening beats damaru.
Lightening looks Gaura on you
thundering glistening beats damaru.
Thys terrain with thunder-storm
looks Natarajan dancing norm.
Thys terrain with thunder-storm
looks Natarajan dancing norm.

Tiger skin cloth cloud flower
mist being as pure pyre flower.
Tiger skin cloth cloud flower
mist being as pure pyre flower.
Ganpat god rained with reasons
tridents mixture of seasons.
Ganpat god rained with reasons
tridents mixture of seasons.

Thys mind-pleasing look with norm
Thys mind-pleasing look with norm
 matching just one that's Shiva form.
O my Mountain king Karol
you are so wonderful soul.
When this world rejected
you happily adopted.
O my Mountain king Karol
you are so wonderful soul.
When this world rejected
you happily adopted.
O my Mountain king Karol
you are so wonderful soul.
O my Mountain king Karol
you are so wonderful soul.
O my Mountain king Karol.
-Hridayesh Bal


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Poetic Form
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Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 4,488
Words 879
Sentences 79
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 13, 24, 24, 24, 24, 8, 8, 8, 8, 17
Lines Amount 158
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 358
Words per stanza (avg) 79

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a devotional song-poem full of amazing natural beauty.

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Written on June 20, 2021

Submitted by bhishmsharma95 on October 30, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Bhishm sharma

 I am as natural as air and water. I take in hand whatever is there to work hard and make a merry. I am fond of Yoga, Tantra, Music and Cinema. My twitter address ~ @bhishmsharma95 more…

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