Analysis of My dear saviour



I sat near those strangers
Who I never thought had become my saviour
He said to open my heart
The holy spirit said to believe him
What is this feelings? Am I happy?

Like a magician who make things disappear
You got vanished all my scars
Why do I love you?
Cause you are the only one
Why am I fighting for you?
You fought for me when no one did
All those past days that I hide my tears
Are no longer like that!

Even in these tiring days
I'm the happiest when I see you
You found me at my worst
When I don't know who I am,
You made me find myself
Why you seem so far?
Before I die, I want to thank you!


Scheme XAXXX AXBXBXXX XBXXXAB
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Etheree  (20%)
Metre 111110 1110110111 1111011 0101011011 111101110 1001011101 1110111 11111 1110101 1111011 11111111 111111111 111011 1001101 101001111 111111 1111111 11111 11111 011111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 602
Words 136
Sentences 7
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 5, 8, 7
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 154
Words per stanza (avg) 43

About this poem

I wrote this about someone who i love the most and who saved me from darkest days

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Written on October 11, 2022

Submitted by aleenajames1818 on October 11, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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