Analysis of Lilly



Still inside my Lilly vase
When traps are still at bay,
Though my Lilies never chose,
Troubles storm, and even
Lillie's go into graves.

When summer comes
Our shells extend
We flutter on about. In the
Middle, yanked apart,
Emerging fields of gold.

In seasons we hide,
Inside we work solo,
In vacuum and space-
To keep us moist,
Daily and so we toil.

Fields emerge from Lillie’s
Deep beyond grazing cattle
Fields, still, they open out in June
And stay until October's end, but once
a Lilly blooms, they too go into graves.


Scheme AXXXB XXXXX XXAXX AXXXB
Poetic Form Etheree  (60%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 1011101 111111 1110101 101010 11011 1101 10101 11010100 10101 010111 01011 01111 01001 1111 100111 10111 1011010 11110101 0101010111 0101111011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 527
Words 107
Sentences 5
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5, 5
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 102
Words per stanza (avg) 24

About this poem

Lilly is a poem about how all things toil and die. It's not meant to be sad, but rather embraces the process that things must go through and meet in the end. I hope you enjoy reading my entry and consider my work worthy of publication

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Written on August 06, 2022

Submitted by mahawritesdaily on October 01, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Maha Yawa

I am a writer and producer with a postgraduate certificate in Creative Writing from Newcastle University. I also have a Law degree from the University of Leeds, United Kingdom. I was born and raised in Kaduna State, Nigeria, which was occasionally plagued with religious segregation and insecurity. I am fluent in Hausa and English and have spent my early career producing for television and radio with many broadcast networks including; BBC Media Action, Silverbird television, Golden Effects pictures and more. I enjoy working with themes that speak directly to social justice, love and coming of age. I am passionate about art, words, design and film and have an incredible love for people and animals. You can chat with me on Instagram @mahayawa or email me @mahawritesdaily.com. more…

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