Analysis of Laziness the root of man's defeat.



Laziness the root of man's defeat
   Laziness the root of many problems in life.
    Man's greatest   friend to escape but an enemy to destroy.
   The fresh breeze of life but a burning coal to endowment.
It as sweet words to soothe my mind, but as  to keep it in my heart for pain.
          They laughed at me to mock, but I kept them in company for fun. There is no place to work but laziness comes to stay.  
 My home and dream life comes to real but laziness buries it in a bin.
 The root to man 's problems as come to stay  beware!!


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Poetic Form
Metre 100011101 100011101001 110110111100101 01111101011010 111111111111101111 11111111110100111111111100111 110111111100101001 0111110111101
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 539
Words 110
Sentences 8
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 49
Words per line (avg) 14
Letters per stanza (avg) 393
Words per stanza (avg) 108

About this poem

Laziness is the tool, of man's challenge s today.its brings about different shortcut but it is a destructive path . and this leads to many lost opportunities in life. This poem opens deep insight to its dangers and effect s on man.

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Submitted by fundlad9 on October 08, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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