Analysis of I was wrong
Perfect, was a time which used to be,
Had no stress,
Regrets of anything, neither,
I thought,
Life as a soulful rendition,
Filled with soothing moments & Happiness
But, mistaken I was,
For life rests in pain,
I am Fantasizing, I feel...
Of a time, when I thought
My voice is mesmerising,
Pleases the one who heard,
A sweet arrow, my smile,
Pierces through the heart,
But, Wrong I was,
For the voice irritates, someone,
Hurts some other, my smile
I know it today, I was revering...
Gone, a time when I thought,
My heart is filled with,
Tenderness, care and innocence,
Charm, admired by someone,
Who misses my presence,
Kept my name in his diary of heart,
But, misdirected I was,
For my heart is filled with
Cruelty, envy & hate.
I realise now, I am supercillious
Habituated, now I am,
To my amateur deeds,
Used to live like an infant.
Soothing, it has been,
Without the weight of responsibility,
Of forcing myself to be ideal.
Yeah! I was wrong,
Perfect, I am not
But real, I am,
One in a million,
I am my own self...
Scheme | ABXCDXEXF CGXHIEDHG CJKDKIEJXBLXXXAF GXLDX |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 011011111 111 0111010 11 11010010 111010100 101011 11101 1110011 101111 1111 100111 011011 1101 1111 101101 111011 1110111010 101111 11111 10010100 101011 110110 1110110011 1001011 111111 10101 111111 1111 11101 1111110 10111 0101100100 11011101 1111 01111 1111 10010 11111 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 1,020 |
Words | 223 |
Sentences | 7 |
Stanzas | 4 |
Stanza Lengths | 9, 9, 16, 5 |
Lines Amount | 39 |
Letters per line (avg) | 20 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 192 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 47 |
About this poem
What I am thinking today and basically it's a comparison between today and yesterday's thoughts of mine....
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Written on October 11, 2022
Submitted by Subhalaxmisahoo036 on October 29, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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