Analysis of Hanging In

Akosua Ella 2000 (Hohow)



I've been here hanging in waiting
Waiting for you to realise how much you mean to me
How much I adore you
I've been here hanging in waiting
Waiting for you to make up your mind
To ascertain if you want to go on this forever journey with me

But it looks like you can't even make up your mind.
How sad Cariño that you still don't believe
That our fairytale could have a happily ever after
I've waited for so long
Now my patience running out.

The clock's ticking
Time's rolling out
Can't wait forever
Wanna move on
But that soft spot won't let me
I wake up, I cry
I pray you realise
It's you I want
I wish we could happen
I wish our fantasy would flourish like in the fairytales

Wish I could be your princess and you be my knight in shining armour.
I've got wishes but common sense trynna tell me to let the fuck go .
But that soft spot won't let me


Scheme AbxAcb cxdxe aedxBxfxxf dxB
Poetic Form
Metre 11110010 101111111111 111011 11110010 101111111 10111111110101011 111111101111 1111111101 110101101001010 110111 1110101 0110 1101 11010 1011 1111111 11111 1111 1111 111110 111010011010010 11111100111101010 1110110111111011 1111111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 868
Words 192
Sentences 5
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 6, 5, 10, 3
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 165
Words per stanza (avg) 43

About this poem

This poem is about an heartbroken lover.This lover pours out her innermost feelings to a supposedly undecisive partner. She strongly wishes they could be together but the partner seems unconcerned.

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Written on October 14, 2022

Submitted by emmanuella_a on October 14, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Akosua Ella

Writing under the name Akosua Ella ,Emmanuella Awuitor is a level 300 college student in Ghana. She loves to read and write. And one day hopes to become one of the most eloquent writers in the history of ever. more…

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