Analysis of Fire and ice

Shwetalini Sonawane 1998 (Maharashtra)



Your fingers wrapped around my fingers.
Your touch feels like fire and ice
Like last night's leftover pizza
You taste like sugar and spice.

You often talk about your dreams and I can see it through your eyes
Lying beside you till sunrise

For all happy moments and all fighte
I crave for all those sleepless nights

You admire the mole on my chin and
 I can't resist
becoming one skin.

Honey you are made up of old books
My comfort zone
Like stardust
Apart from skin and bone


Scheme XAXA BB CX CCX XDCD
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 110101110 11111001 1111010 1111001 1101011101111111 1001111 111010011 11111101 101011110 1101 01011 101111111 1101 11 011101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 478
Words 96
Sentences 4
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 2, 2, 3, 4
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 76
Words per stanza (avg) 18
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Submitted by shwetalinisonawane13 on October 09, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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