Analysis of Creepiness of sleep



A sudden heaviness of eye lids,
No control, no strength to move even a brow,
Drunk out of blues, dizziness accompanies,
Never have i visited a sleep brew,
Why do sleep keep bothering me?

Shows up during class sessions,
But disappears during leisure,
Humbled i can be, aiming to gain,
Then boom! Villainy interrupts,
Why do sleep keep bothering me?

Pah! Fights a battle that is unplanned,
An enemy of progress it has become,
Have no fatigue, healthy and rested i am,
But during classes weary and wornout I am,
Why do sleep keep bothering me?

All my school life it is the antagonist,
I being naive, confused protagonist,
Gives a sensation of great boredom,
Before lessons it's no where but during,
Why do sleep keep bothering me?


Scheme xxxxA xxxxA xbccA ddbxA
Poetic Form
Metre 0101111 10111111001 11111000100 1011100011 11111001 1110110 1011010 101111011 11101 11111001 110101101 1100111101 11011001011 11010100111 11111001 11111100100 1101010100 100101110 0110111110 11111001
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 736
Words 150
Sentences 6
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5, 5
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 143
Words per stanza (avg) 32

About this poem

This poem is about how sleep bothers a student or whoever is focused.

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Written on August 15, 2021

Submitted by akuolatem200 on October 15, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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