Analysis of CHILD RIGHTS



My golden years of magnificient dreams,
of wild adventures and funny screams.

These friends with whom I play day-night
And luring cousins in countless fights.

The caring of my mom and dad,
they feed me curry that seems so bad.

The imaginative world of Mickey Mouse
and a burning desire of a chocolate house.

All these seems so good to me.
The world seems free without any fear.
But wait,
What I see now on the street
similar eyes with tears.

What are you craving for Oh my peer??
Is it food , shelter, or something dear.

So tender age and struggle so hard
May God have mercy in this regard.

Collecting your valuables from the street,
you hope of getting something to eat.

Grade school is your dream so high,
you feel afraid and remain so shy.

You expect someone to hold your hand,
and take you to a wonderland,
where you play and roll and run and slide,
fly high up in a fairy ride.

But presently,
you sweep, clean and strive on road
giving away the golden years of delight
Nearby is a huge billboard
that is crying '*FIGHT FOR CHILD RIGHT*


Scheme AA BX CC DD EFXGX FF HH GG II JJKK EXBXB
Poetic Form Etheree  (30%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 1101111 110100101 11111111 010100101 01011101 111101111 00100011101 001001010101 1111111 011101101 11 1111101 100111 111101111 111101101 110101011 111100101 0101100101 111101011 1111111 110100111 10111111 0111010 111010101 11100101 1100 1110111 10010101101 111011 11101111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,051
Words 227
Sentences 14
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 5, 2, 2, 2, 2, 4, 5
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 74
Words per stanza (avg) 18

About this poem

I felt motivated to write this poem seeing small children running on the street and striving for their essentials.It was disheartening to see that their parents made them work at such a tender age.I have written this poem,portraying myself as a child of tender age who is well off.But one day when he see children of his age struggling on the streets being clumsy and bare footed,he feel disheartened.

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Written on October 12, 2022

Submitted by sinhaar46 on October 28, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Aditya Ranjan

My name is Aditya Ranjan.I live in city Jamshedpur in the state of Jharkhand.I have completed my graduation from St.Xavier's college( Autonomous),Kolkata.I feel I can give words to my thoughts ,feelings and perception and can present it in front of the world in the form of a poem. more…

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