Analysis of Chaos of us

Soumya Kumari 2003 (Jharkhand)



Amongst the chaos
Filling the heart
Found some peace.
Wanna hop out
Of the dark,
What's the point
Livin' like this?
When life craves
For happiness
Feels like I'm drowning
In my own self
Remembering the moments
Between us
Those happy moments
Now roll down my cheek
"US"  was not meant
To be this!
Now my heart is bleak
Save me please!
I'm numb,
I wanna live
Not merely live
Some leaves of joy
To cherish
Until and unless
I succumb!


Scheme ABCDEFGHIJKLILMNGMOPQQRSTP
Poetic Form
Metre 01010 1001 111 1011 101 101 111 111 1100 11110 0111 0100010 011 11010 11111 1111 111 11111 111 11 1101 1101 1111 110 01001 101
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 443
Words 95
Sentences 6
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 26
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 13
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 336
Words per stanza (avg) 82

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A free verse written straight from the heart

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Written on September 25, 2022

Submitted by soumyak0312 on October 20, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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